The Inadequate Heir (The Bridge Kingdom) by Danielle L. Jensen
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In the third novel of the iconic Bridge Kingdom series, forbidden romance blooms between two sworn enemies who must choose between their thirst for vengeance and their love for one another—from the New York Times bestselling author of A Fate Inked in Blood.

A soldier raised as heir to an empire, Zarrah is motivated by two truths. The first is that the Veliant family murdered her mother. And the second is that her pursuit of vengeance will put every last one of them in their graves.

The Endless War between Maridrina and Valcotta has raged for generations, leaving thousands of Zarrah’s people dead and countless more orphaned. So when she’s given command of the contested city of Nerastis, Zarrah is prepared to do whatever it takes to destroy the Maridrinian forces who oppose her. And to kill the Veliant prince who leads them.

Yet a chance encounter with an anonymous, and handsome, Maridrinian causes Zarrah to question whether the violence she’s perpetrated is justice or a crime. And as she continues to meet the nameless man each night, she finds common ground—and fiery passion—in his arms.

But when identities are revealed, Zarrah must decide whether to embrace a chance at peace . . . or march to the drums of war.

Don’t miss any of Danielle L. Jensen's Bridge Kingdom series: THE BRIDGE KINGDOM • THE TRAITOR QUEEN • THE INADEQUATE HEIR • THE ENDLESS WAR

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0593975243

ISBN-13

978-0593975244

Print length

688 pages

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English

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Del Rey

Publication date

December 09, 2024

Dimensions

5.5 x 1.38 x 8.25 inches

Item weight

1.02 pounds


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"The next installment in the Bridge Kingdom series is not to be missed. Do not walk to pick up this book. Run." - Jennifer L. Armentrout #1 New York Times bestselling author of From Blood and Ash


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KERIS

Keris Veliant, latest heir to the throne of Maridrina, followed his father down the gangplank and onto the pier of Southwatch Island. They hadn’t spoken a word to each other during the short crossing, his father remaining on deck while Keris closeted himself in the captain’s quarters. Though in truth, even if they’d stood side by side the entire voyage, the result would’ve been the same: the taciturn silence of two men well aware that each wished the other dead.

A masked Ithicanian, his shoulders stooped with age, approached, bowing low. “Welcome back to Southwatch, Your Majesty.” Then he inclined his head toward Keris. “Welcome, Your Highness. I understand this is to be your first venture through our bridge?”

Keris opened his mouth to answer, but his father interrupted, “Are they here?”

“His Grace sends his regrets, I’m afraid. His presence was required elsewhere.”

A flicker of disappointment passed through Keris at the Ithicanian king’s absence. Aren Kertell was a man much discussed, though the rumors surrounding him were at odds with his recent actions. Actions that had the Maridrinian people singing his name in the streets, claiming him a king that all rulers should aspire to emulate.

And Keris’s father hated him for it.

Yet King Silas Veliant showed none of that ire, his tone steady as he asked, “What of my daughter?”

Lara. She was Keris’s younger sister—his only full-blooded sibling in the sea of half sisters and brothers produced by his father’s harem. He hadn’t spoken to her in over sixteen years—not since she’d been taken away to be raised in secret. Keris had believed her dead until the day she’d passed through Vencia on her way to be married to the King of Ithicana as part of the Fifteen Year Treaty. A bride of peace, they’d said.

Keris didn’t believe that for a heartbeat.

The Ithicanian said, “It is the Queen’s preference to remain at His Majesty’s side, though she sends her regards.”

“I’m sure.”

On the surface, his father’s voice was cool, but for the sake of his own self-preservation, Keris had long ago made a practice of reading the tiny tics and tells that gave away his father’s true sentiments. As such, he heard the hint of amusement in the king’s voice, the tone causing Keris’s skin to prickle. What amused his father tended to elicit a rather different reaction from everyone else.

The Ithicanian’s eyes narrowed slightly, and wary of anything that might jeopardize his escape to Harendell, Keris said, “I’m sorry to have missed my sister, but pleased to hear of her loyalty to your king. Give them both my best wishes.”

His father huffed out a soft chuckle, giving Keris a condescending pat on the cheek. “My son is sentimental. Gets it from his mother.”

That would be the mother you murdered, you cold-blooded reptile? Keris wanted to say, but today was not the day to test his father’s patience. Not when he was so close to finally escaping him. “We all have our faults, Your Grace.”

His father’s azure eyes, which were twin to Keris’s own, regarded him, unblinking. “Some more than others.” Then he clapped his hands sharply. “I came only to see your sister and her husband. Given they are absent, I don’t care to belabor my presence. Let’s get this over with.”

Sentiment was not one of King Silas Veliant’s faults.

The pier turned into a flurry of activity, two dozen young Maridrinian men in tight coats made with vibrant fabrics disembarking, the stiff breeze tugging at their slicked-back hair, much to their obvious consternation. The smell of wine came with them, which accounted for their overloud voices as they shouted at the sailors to take care with their belongings or suffer the lash. Between his teeth, Keris asked, “Who are they?”

His father crossed his arms, a slight smile growing on his face. “Your entourage.”

“I’m going to university, not to court, Your Grace. This is an unnecessary expense.”

“You are heir to the throne of Maridrina,” his father answered, “which means you must arrive in Harendell with a suitable entourage.” Under his breath, he added, “You’re embarrassment enough—no need to add to the shame.”

Don’t argue. Keep your damned mouth shut, Keris silently ordered himself. But the temper he usually kept in check was rising. “This will cost a fortune. Better for us to go by ship. It’s the calm season—there’s no reason not to.” On a ship, it wouldn’t matter if these men behaved like idiots, whereas the Ithicanians had rules of conduct in their bridge and no patience for those who broke them, which these buffoons would inevitably do within the day.

Perhaps that was what his father was counting on.

“Don’t be a fool, Keris. The seas are swarming with Valcottan vessels, and the last thing I need is for my heir to be killed.”

“Given my eight predecessors are in their graves, I’d think you’d be used to that by now.”

The words sneaked out, and Keris immediately braced for the blow, long used to his tongue earning him beatings. Yet instead, his father gripped him by the shoulders, pulling him close so that his mouth was inches from Keris’s ear. To anyone looking on, it would appear nothing more than an intimate exchange between father and son, but Keris’s arms were already numb with pain from where his father’s thumbs pressed against nerves.

“Your older brother was twice the man you are,” his father hissed. “I’d exchange your life for Rask’s in a heartbeat, if such a thing were possible.”

And not just Rask. Despite Keris having brothers who were arguably worth less than the detritus of humanity, his father held every one of them in greater esteem. It was only Keris that he hated, only Keris whom he mocked without mercy.

“I wish Rask were still alive as much as you do.” Not because he’d liked his brother, but because with Rask performing all the duties the heir was supposed to do—soldiering, politicizing, and warmongering—Keris had been able to avoid them. But Rask had gotten himself killed in a skirmish with the Valcottans, and Keris’s greatest fear since his brother’s death was that he’d be able to avoid soldiering, politicizing, and warmongering no longer. Which was why his father not backtracking out of his agreement to allow him to go to Harendell had seemed like nothing short of an act of God.

Which, given he was a disbeliever of the first order, made Keris extremely suspicious.

“You are pathetic and weak, and your tongue is not worthy of speaking your brother’s name.” His father’s grip tightened. “But you are still my son. Which means I must find ways to capitalize upon your attributes, limited though they may be.”

And there was the catch.

Of course his father wanted something from him. He wouldn’t allow Keris to go without making him pay a price. “What will it be, Father? Spying on the Harendellians, I assume?”

He chuckled, and the sound made Keris’s skin crawl. Then his father released his shoulders. “No, Keris. I’ve spies aplenty. But rest assured that I will find a way to use you to my benefit.” And without another word, he strode up the gangplank and disappeared onto the ship.

Not spying, but something. And whatever it was, Keris knew he wouldn’t like it.

The old Ithicanian still stood a few paces away, waiting patiently. “If you’d follow me, Your Highness, we will get underway. We have restrictions on what is allowed through the bridge, which means all persons and baggage are subject to search. And”—his eyes flicked to the stacks of chests and to Keris’s entourage—“that might take more time than anticipated.”


Hours was what it took, the Ithicanians removing them to a stone warehouse where everything was thoroughly searched before being loaded into narrow wagons. And though Keris had watched his father’s ship sail away, he couldn’t shirk the sense that something would happen that would see him not in Harendell, but back in Maridrina, once again immersed in a war he wanted no part of. A war he was opposed to on every possible level.

“They ready?”

A female voice caught his attention, and Keris lifted his face from the book he was reading to find an Ithicanian woman striding into the warehouse, several other armed Ithicanians on her heels. She was tall and lean, her dark-brown hair shaved on the sides of her head and the rest pulled back into a long tail at the back. She wore the drab greyish-green tunic and trousers that the Ithicanians favored, her thick leather boots rising to her knees and a multitude of weapons belted at her waist. Her arms were bare except for the vambraces buckled around them, her skin tanned but for the few pale scars lining it that suggested she was no stranger to combat. Like the rest of her countrymen, she wore a leather mask, making it difficult to guess her age with any certainty, but Keris doubted she was more than twenty.

The old Ithicanian nodded. “Their luggage is in order. An overabundance of drink, but they assure me it is for the journey, not to sell.” His jaw tightened. “Their… conduct gives verity to the claim.”

“Lovely. There is nothing I like better than escorting drunk Maridrinian pricks.”

Keris laughed.

Her head jerked sideways, gaze lighting upon Keris where he leaned against the wall, far away from his companions.

After coughing to clear his throat, the old Ithicanian said, “This is Crown Prince Keris Veliant. The Queen’s elder brother.”

The woman inclined her head. “My apologies, Your Highness. I regret you overhearing my comment.”

But she did not regret saying it. Keris liked her already. “Given I’m quite sober, I assume you’re delighted to escort me.”

Her hazel eyes flickered with amusement. “Sober… but you are a Maridrinian.”

“And a prick, as luck would have it.” He smirked at her. “I hope your king pays you well.”

“Not well enough.” She gestured toward his entourage. “If you’ll join your companions, Highness, you’ll be searched for weapons, and then we’ll be on our way.”

Keris made no comments as one of the soldiers accompanying her searched him from head to toe for weapons, pulling off his boots and inspecting their soles, the man’s efficiency suggesting he’d done this a hundred times and knew his business well. Keris’s entourage, on the other hand, snickered and laughed through the whole affair, making comments that had Keris grinding his teeth. He was on the verge of shouting at them to shut their damned mouths when one of them said to the Ithicanian woman, who was kneeling while searching him, “You look well practiced in this position, girl.”

Every Ithicanian in the room went still, their anger palpable even to the fools in his entourage, whose faces quickly drained of humor.

Shit.

The Ithicanian woman’s jaw had visibly tightened, but she said nothing as she finished her search. Then she stood abruptly, her shoulder catching the idiot between the legs hard enough that he screamed. Toppling over, he lay on his side, cursing and moaning while he clutched his groin.

The woman turned to the old Ithicanian, snapping, “There a Maridrinian ship in port, Rin?”

“Two.”

“Good. Pick one and tell them they’re taking His Highness and his men back to Vencia. Passage through the bridge is denied.”

Keris’s stomach dropped, panic rushing through his veins. He’d known this would happen. That his father would find some way to go back on his word.

“Raina.” The old man’s voice was disapproving. “Prince Keris is Queen Lara’s brother.”

Her eyes flicked to Keris, looking him up and down. “We’ll take him, then. But not the rest.”

It was tempting. Oh so terribly tempting to take the woman up on her offer and go through the bridge alone, but Keris knew his father would make him pay for such a decision. He always did.

“I’m sorry for his disrespect.” Walking over to the woman—Raina—Keris stopped a courteous distance from her. “He’s a fool, but he doesn’t deserve to die.”

“I didn’t hit him that hard.” Her voice was withering. “He’ll live.”

“Not if you send him back.” Keris lifted one shoulder. “My father tolerates embarrassment poorly. The unfortunate sot will be dead within an hour of making port unless he finds the courage to jump overboard on the journey back.”

“Perhaps he should have considered the consequences before he spoke.”

“I doubt he’s capable of that much foresight.” Keris glanced at the men, who were silent for once, and he could see in their eyes that they knew the threat was real. Not only to the idiot on the ground, but to all of them. “They won’t step out of line again; you have my word.”

She exhaled a long breath, rocking on her heels. “Don’t make me regret this.”

“We will be on our best behavior.”

Even with her mask, he saw her eyes roll. But she gestured to the wagons. “Get in.”

His entourage scurried toward the traveling wagons, polished affairs with well-upholstered seating that were pulled by pairs of mules. Comfortable enough, but far too close in quarters for Keris’s liking. “Do you mind if I walk?”

Raina shrugged. “Be my guest.”

The caravan creaked into motion, nine more heavily armed Ithicanians flanking the wagons as they trundled out of the warehouse and into the light rain. Raina led the way, and Keris followed at her heels, his eyes going up the slope to the cavernous mouth of the bridge. Mist emanated from the grey stone as the rain struck it, and as they approached, a heavy steel portcullis rose, the rattling of chains rivaling the distant rumble of thunder.

Raina cast her face skyward, the rain splattering against her mask. “Be glad you chose not to go by ship, Your Highness.”

Keris eyed the dark opening, the steel bars of the bottom of the portcullis looking remarkably like teeth. “Why is that?”

“Because there’s a storm coming.” Then, taking a glowing lantern from one of the waiting guards, she led Keris inside the bridge.

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About the authors

Danielle L. Jensen

Danielle L. Jensen

Danielle L. Jensen is the New York Times bestselling author of A Fate Inked in Blood, as well as the USA Today bestselling author of the Bridge Kingdom, Dark Shores, and Malediction series. Her novels are published internationally in nineteen languages. She lives in Calgary, Alberta, with her family and guinea pigs.


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This Nurse Reads

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Danielle Jensen's characters are so easy to love and once again, I have fallen..

Reviewed in the United States on April 25, 2023

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⭐️ 4.75

Danielle Jensen's characters are so easy to love and once again, I have fallen...

“I do want to remake the world so that I can be with you. So that I can get down on my knees and ask you to be my wife. So that I can put a crown on your head and make you my queen. So I can build a shrine and worship you as my goddess. I want all of these things, yet I face a future with none of them, and I don't know whether I want to fall on my own blade or burn everything to ash because I do not want to let you go.”

This book runs parallel to The Traitor Queen but with a different perspective. Instead of following Aren and Lara, RIP to their POV novels being completed, we are taken on an adventure through the eyes of Keris Veliant-heir to the throne of Maridrina and son of King Silas Veliant-and Zarrah Anaphora, respected general and niece to the Empress of Valcotta.

Zarrah is stationed in the city of Nerastis, planning to lead her people to victory in The Endless War. She is driven by hate, vengeance and trauma, and god-willing she will not rest until every last Maridrinian has died at her blade. When the empress demands that they hold on their plans to attack, Zarrah decides to sneak across the river into Maridrinian territory and kill the crown prince stationed on the other side...

Keris never wanted this life. If it were up to him he'd be up North with his head in a book far away from his father and the war. Of course, it doesn't matter what he wants and instead he is forced to be as close to it all as possible, stuck in Nerastis with the smell of booze, death and dirt. That is until he sees a beautiful women in the streets...

Zarrah's plan does not go smoothly and she runs into an anonymous Maridrinian, with golden locks and handsome features. There is something about him she cannot resist and as they continue to meetup in secret, she begins to question everything she held true.

Hence begins an affair built off of dreams. But as their relations turn to passion, a mistake is made and identities revealed! A capture is made! Zarrah is taken to Maridrina and must rely on her sworn enemy to survive. Will she continue to listen to her head or learn to lead with her heart?

This continues to be a favorite fantasy series of mine! It checks off so many boxes and the character development is so beautifully done.

Although I fell hard for Aren, Keris is the antihero you want to root for in the end. He is a master of swoon worthy words and his actions hold true. He is devilishly intelligent, brooding and 🔥

Zarrah is a character to look up to but also want to be! She is strong, with a weapon but also with her soul. Although she has endured deep grief she continues to be able to pick herself up and seek honor despite her opportunity for instant reward through vengeance. She’s also downright kickass and can tell a man exactly what she wants 🔥

I enjoyed the growth of these two characters immensely and the bond between Keris and Zarrah is palpable. There are moments within that so brightly express their love and heartbreak and I was ALL here for it.

✔️ forbidden romance ✔️ enemies to lovers ✔️ Political scheming

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Just me

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Not an Inadequate story

Reviewed in the United States on January 17, 2024

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I've read this book twice now, and I enjoyed it immensely both times. The interaction between Keris and Zarrah is intriguing and draws you in. The scene where they discover their identities is just gut-wrenching. You truly feel for both of them and the crappy situation they are in, none of it their own doing but an accident of fate. I adore the banter between them. Keris is the best at delivering snark. I can picture his smirk in my mind every time he drops a line, and it makes me grin.

There are some things going on the periphery that kind of make me sigh, and not in a good way, but they are so minor and the scenes with Keris and Zarrah together make me forget everything else. I also struggled a bit trying to picture the river gap where they would meet, but that is my malfunction, not because of the writing. Geometry was never my strong suit. Nor physics, apparently.

All in all, this is a solid read, and the leads are superb characters. Highly recommend this book.

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Brooke

Brooke

5

Great to be back in the Bridge Kingdom world!

Reviewed in the United States on June 8, 2022

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I really enjoyed this book. It was so fun to be back in the world of Maridrina, Ithicana, and Valcotta. I still prefer Aren and Lara and the first two books (only because they’re unbeatable), but Keris and Zarrah were great too.

I was initially curious about how much I would like this book since I wasn’t especially invested in Keris and Zarrah in The Traitor Queen, but I was pleasantly surprised. I liked both characters and their relationship. The first couple chapters started a bit slow but it picked up once Keris and Zarrah met.

In the beginning of the book, I enjoyed the hidden identity and enemies to lovers vibe. However I did feel that they fell for each other a bit too quickly, though I’m willing to overlook that.

Once they arrived at Maridrina, the events overlapped with what we knew from The Traitor Queen and I loved it. It was so interesting to hear Keris’s opinion of Aren and Lara and his perspective on what was happening. It was fun to get to see more of the harem and Coralyn. I have to say, I liked Coralyn a lot less in this book once we see some of her scheming. Seeing Keris’s interaction with his family and his father allowed me to get to know and like his character.

Zarrah is excellent. While I didn’t feel quite as connected with her as Lara, she is still a great protagonist. I love that she’s an amazing fighter and general but still is feminine. Often times it seems that authors attempt to write strong female characters by making them masculine and scorn traits traditionally considered feminine. This author does not fall into that trap, and I thank her wholeheartedly for that. All of the women in this series are strong because of their personalities and actions, not because they act like men.

The ending was intense, to say the least and ends on a cliffhanger. But I am extremely excited about the direction it’s going in. I am curious if Keris will continue to be likable in the next book. His character goes through a gradual descent into darkness and he proves that he will do anything to protect Zarrah even at the cost of his morals and the lives of others.

Overall this book was a great read! I can wait for the sequel!

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Shannon S.

Shannon S.

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Pretty good, slow burn romantasy series

Reviewed in the United States on April 17, 2024

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I enjoyed reading The Bridge Kingdom series over the last few weeks, and while it was a good fantasy series, it wasn’t an epic story. There were moments when I loved the storyline and characters, but truthfully, the overarching story was long and drawn out at times, so I struggled to stay focused and read very much each day. I will say that the first and final books are my two favorites because they both had unique storylines with not much overlap, if any, with the other books. On the other hand, books two and three were essentially the same story but told from the perspective of the two different couples in each book. It was nice to get more background on the machinations behind the characters' motivations, but at times, it felt stale and tedious, especially in book three while listening to it. If you enjoy slow-burn fantasy stories with decent world-building, this series is worth checking out; it’s just not an incredible one. The narrators across all four books did an excellent job with the story, and I recommend checking out the audiobooks!

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Kate

Kate

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Well this was an unexpected delight!

Reviewed in the United States on April 4, 2024

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Danielle Jensen is a master at the perfect blend between fantasy and romance. You’re not wanting for either in this book!

World Building: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Not much new was established in this book, but you do learn much more about the war history.

Main Character(s): ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A classic Slytherin/Gryffindor love story if there’s ever been one. I ended up liking Keris more than Zarrah, but I feel that both are extremely well developed characters. Their romance was captivating and not too much.

Plot: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Yeah I did it. This is a 5 star plot book. Even though the timeline of this book overlaps with the other Bridge Kingdom books, this felt wholly new to me. Could it be because it’s been nearly 2 years since I read BK 1&2? Maybe. I remembered enough and still found this delightful. I adore escapades and political machinations and this book is ripe with them! I also loved seeing the story from two different perspectives. I want to go back and read the first two knowing what I do now.

Spice: 🌶️🌶️ Actual spice is a two pepper for sure, but the tension is thiiiiickkkkk enough to cut with a spoon.

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